When???

Walking slowly,
Not walking at all,
Im falling,
Falling far down,
Down into the underground!!!
Where did my life go wrong?
Where did i take that wrong turn,
When did i lose my way,
When did i lose my life?!?!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 28, 2009 at 5:16 PM
You can always get up Very Touching*.*
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