When...

when you are so close to seeking,
you never do.
when you are so close to loving,
they cheat on you.
when you are so close to death,
you live a long while.
life is confusing but is specially mild.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 10, 2016 at 1:58 AM
i enjoyed your poems. Ash...Linda ...
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November 19, 2008 at 8:52 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol
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