When

When a teacher is kind, the students mind When she's too stern, they just can't learn When a father explains, happiness reigns If he loses his cool, his kids think him cruel When the boss lends an ear, the employees hear If they're turned away, there's a price to pay When a judge shows mercy, he limits controversy If he rules too strictly, he seems mean and prickly When former enemies unite, it's a wonderful sight, If one is forgiving, both their lives are worth living

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/10/2019 2:25:00 PM

Oh WOW Gershon this is poetry at its best. Thought, care, inspiration and not forgetting, the rhythm and rhyme. Great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/10/2019 4:39:00 PM

Whoa! Thank you so much for the effusive outpouring of praise, Jennifer. Don't know that this poem is worthy of it, but I sure appreciate the encouragement! Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2019 8:59:00 AM

A thoughtful write, Gershon. Well done.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/10/2019 4:37:00 PM

Appreciate your feedback, Line, given over as thoughtfully as its content. :) gw

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/9/2019 9:47:00 PM

Lovely done! A wise and delightful write. xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/9/2019 10:40:00 PM

Thank you so much. I only hope to be worthy of half of your praise, my friend. Best wishes, gw