When

When a teacher is kind, the students mind
   When she's too stern, they just can't learn

When a father explains, happiness reigns
   If he loses his cool, his kids think him cruel

When the boss lends an ear, the employees hear
   If they're turned away, there's a price to pay 

When a judge shows mercy, he limits controversy
   If he rules too strictly, he seems mean and prickly 

When former enemies unite, it's a wonderful sight,
   If one is forgiving, both their lives are worth living
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Date: 4/10/2019 2:25:00 PM
Oh WOW Gershon this is poetry at its best. Thought, care, inspiration and not forgetting, the rhythm and rhyme. Great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/10/2019 4:39:00 PM
Whoa! Thank you so much for the effusive outpouring of praise, Jennifer. Don't know that this poem is worthy of it, but I sure appreciate the encouragement! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 4/10/2019 8:59:00 AM
A thoughtful write, Gershon. Well done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/10/2019 4:37:00 PM
Appreciate your feedback, Line, given over as thoughtfully as its content. :) gw
Date: 4/9/2019 9:47:00 PM
Lovely done! A wise and delightful write. xomo
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Date: 4/9/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thank you so much. I only hope to be worthy of half of your praise, my friend. Best wishes, gw
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