When

When is When When? --When When means When? That's when! ~Alternatively When doesn't When mean When? --When When is when. That's when!

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2018 8:53:00 PM

Amazing what we can do with a little play on words

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 9:31:00 PM

Well, I got lucky with this one, methinks. Thanks for the boost! Appreciated! :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/23/2018 8:02:00 PM

This is either really funny or I'm just laughing at anything tonight... No I think it's really funny. Well done, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 9:30:00 PM

Ha-ha! Ha! Ah! You know, at this point, you're 110% right: It's either funny or you're laughing at anything. How about a combination of the two?! Ah-oooooh! :) Howling Wolf

Robertina B.

Date: 4/23/2018 6:45:00 PM

So interesting and unique Gershon!! Bravo!! Amazing how you were able to use the word when simultaneously..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 7:57:00 PM

The last two words of your comment are as amazing as anything I put in the poem. Keep those comments coming, Robertina! :) gw