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Wheels

So new and shiny

Such deep tread

So stabile and safe

Bump after bump

Mile after mile

Getting dirty and grimy

Caught the first flat

Plug in the hole

Much less tread

Did I take it for granted

Always got me there before

Another flat

Plug in the hole

Fix the road 

No more flat 

Wash you off 

Old and shiny

Newer then before

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2016 10:08:00 PM
chris brain, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ---LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:59:00 AM
Hey, I can see the roads and the flats. Some roads are always bumpy. The imagery is excellent. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/7/2010 2:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 12:45:00 PM
great imagery and song about life. Sooner or later you must replace those tires - but keep them as talking sticks. -Alan
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Date: 6/7/2010 11:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chris. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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