Wheels

So new and shiny Such deep tread So stabile and safe Bump after bump Mile after mile Getting dirty and grimy Caught the first flat Plug in the hole Much less tread Did I take it for granted Always got me there before Another flat Plug in the hole Fix the road No more flat Wash you off Old and shiny Newer then before

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2016 10:08:00 PM

chris brain, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ---LINDA

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/8/2010 5:59:00 AM

Hey, I can see the roads and the flats. Some roads are always bumpy. The imagery is excellent. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/7/2010 2:26:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Alan Reed

Date: 6/7/2010 12:45:00 PM

great imagery and song about life. Sooner or later you must replace those tires - but keep them as talking sticks. -Alan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 11:25:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chris. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol