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Wheel of Time

Wheel Of Time. . The rusty ancient transient Wheel of time Unforgiving and impatient Revolve wind and grind Slowly winding the future back Perpetually . Time will still go on Long after we have gone It has no brake We are able to Manipulate the gears By making most Of our gifted years As long as we have life. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/27/2020 3:06:00 PM

Everything we do affects many others like a ripple in the lake from a stone's throw. I love the way you ended this Peter. It also reminds me of the Chakra wheels with in our body's field. Wonderfully written my friend! xxoo

Peter Dome
Date: 2/27/2020 3:58:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, been a long time. I'm back. Always a pleasure. Thank you. take care. X.,

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/27/2020 9:26:00 AM

Hi Peter, You have penned a well written poem. I agree, we must make the most of our lives. Because it goes by in a flash. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Peter Dome
Date: 2/27/2020 1:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend Really appreciate your kind words. take care. Pete.