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Whats Wrong With Me?

When I fall, I fall to hard. When I walk, I walk to far. When I speak, I speak to softly. When I think, I think to much. Life just gets too hard, And i don't know what to do. The air gets too thick, And I can't breathe. I speak my mind, But some thing else comes out. Just make it all stop. The life I planned is something different. The thoughts I had never went this far. The person I thought I was never has been. The like I wanted just can't be. What's wrong wiht me?

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Date: 8/25/2008 8:53:00 AM
You are extremely emotional like most of us poets. I do not know your age but if yo are young, then those emotions are magnified, as you are most likely discovering yourself and the world, with all its ups and downs. Hang in there and keep writing. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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