Whats Up Doc

document of truth has cut off all ties ~ gone to bunny boil his lies By David Kavanagh

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Thomas Wells

Date: 11/26/2022 9:14:00 PM

Like any good Monoku, its power is in what it doesn't say. I have a hunch about who you are discussing, and if I'm right, his goose is cooked, at least in terms of the law. An enjoyable read!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/27/2022 1:32:00 AM

Thank you Thomas, Indeed the cap might fit many a dubious character, but the one it’s aimed at would indeed know his goose is cooked, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2022 4:42:00 PM

Insightful and carefully pondered monoku, David. Whenever I read one of your poems, I'm reminded of how neoplatonic your muse is, and how much truth is concealed behind verses. It's possible that some unsuspected generation in the future may blow the dust off those secrets, though.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/26/2022 3:36:00 AM

Not much love lost here platonic or otherwise Lasaad, but certainly written for the greater good, thank you so much for stopping by to comment, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2022 10:10:00 AM

I know this is the cartoon character, but somehow this seems to be saying something a lot deeper!

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/24/2022 10:49:00 AM

Yes indeed Andrea, my poem is aimed at a particular nasty piece of work amongst us, who took all my comments down because I had the (temerity) for taking him to task, cheers David

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/24/2022 2:50:00 AM

A sublime poem critique of some shady character. Kudos! ^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too"

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/24/2022 4:56:00 AM

Much worse than shady Zaynab, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/23/2022 8:09:00 AM

Maybe he's already in the asylum, best place for him lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/23/2022 8:24:00 AM

Indeed it is Tom, only a matter of time til he’s locked away for another unspeakable act, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/23/2022 7:19:00 AM

The DOC blocked me, too. It seems he likes to use people as a target but is afraid of return fire.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/23/2022 7:27:00 AM

He’s a total coward, now everyone can see it, if they ever had any doubt, cheers David