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Whats Up Doc

document of truth has cut off all ties ~ gone to bunny boil his lies 

By David Kavanagh

truthmonoku

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Thomas Wells

November 26, 2022 at 9:14 PM

Like any good Monoku, its power is in what it doesn't say. I have a hunch about who you are discussing, and if I'm right, his goose is cooked, at least in terms of the law. An enjoyable read!

David Kavanagh

November 27, 2022 at 1:32 AM

Thank you Thomas, Indeed the cap might fit many a dubious character, but the one it’s aimed at would indeed know his goose is cooked, cheers David

Sotto Poet

November 25, 2022 at 4:42 PM

Insightful and carefully pondered monoku, David. Whenever I read one of your poems, I'm reminded of how neoplatonic your muse is, and how much truth is concealed behind verses. It's possible that some unsuspected generation in the future may blow the dust off those secrets, though.

David Kavanagh

November 26, 2022 at 3:36 AM

Not much love lost here platonic or otherwise Lasaad, but certainly written for the greater good, thank you so much for stopping by to comment, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

November 24, 2022 at 10:10 AM

I know this is the cartoon character, but somehow this seems to be saying something a lot deeper!

David Kavanagh

November 24, 2022 at 10:49 AM

Yes indeed Andrea, my poem is aimed at a particular nasty piece of work amongst us, who took all my comments down because I had the (temerity) for taking him to task, cheers David