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What's To Become of Alice

psychotics observe
they see a scripted world
of mindless zombies

young alice was blind
coming from a small village
where nothing differed

alice took a trip
unpredictables galore
and traditions end

these were upon her
on return to village home
her blindness now cured

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/22/2018 2:18:00 PM

Travel opens your eyes to the world, expands your horizons... Didn't someone famous say or write that? ---Now you've expressed it in an intriguing poem. ~ gw

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/8/2018 10:59:00 PM

Hmm, who knows really. I am sure Alice will find her way back- home. ~ Brandy

Sand Blown
Date: 9/15/2018 4:56:00 PM

and perhaps alice would say she just found her home sand

Charles Messina

Date: 9/8/2018 6:10:00 AM

Perhaps she'll go chasing rabbits now (lol) Like this, Sand

Sand Blown
Date: 9/8/2018 11:37:00 AM

shakespeare always seemed he was somewhat of a psychotic mind with his descriptions...such as "all the worlds a stage and....merely actors..."