Sand Blown Poet Haiku

What's To Become of Alice

psychotics observe
they see a scripted world
of mindless zombies

young alice was blind
coming from a small village
where nothing differed

alice took a trip
unpredictables galore
and traditions end

these were upon her
on return to village home
her blindness now cured

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Gershon Wolf October 22, 2018 at 2:18 PM Travel opens your eyes to the world, expands your horizons... Didn't someone famous say or write that? ---Now you've expressed it in an intriguing poem. ~ gw

Brandy Nicole September 8, 2018 at 10:59 PM Hmm, who knows really. I am sure Alice will find her way back- home. ~ Brandy Sand Blown September 15, 2018 at 4:56 PM and perhaps alice would say she just found her home sand

Charles Messina September 8, 2018 at 6:10 AM Perhaps she'll go chasing rabbits now (lol) Like this, Sand Sand Blown September 8, 2018 at 11:37 AM shakespeare always seemed he was somewhat of a psychotic mind with his descriptions...such as "all the worlds a stage and....merely actors..."