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What's On Your Mind

What's on your mind tell me something what's your thoughts what's the deal your mind seems motionless your mind seems still I'm waiting for a thought of expression as we sit still just guessing I just want to know what's happening maybe sometime soon you'll open up you'll bloom until then I'll sit here in gloom I want to know where are you why are you so out of reach why is your thoughts so lost so deep someday I hope to find you so we can reconnect so we can share maybe one day we can talk the way we use to so that we can relate to each other the way we use to until then I'll wait I'm here waiting for that bright ray of the way we use to be won't wait too long sign My love Copyright@March2012

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Date: 4/9/2012 10:46:00 AM
it feels just like a loss when you are in the other position trying to find your words and can't.
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Date: 3/31/2012 4:54:00 AM
Strong write my dear friend... Your words are real and so touching...and your comments on mine brought much smiles, your to kind..luv Michael
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Date: 3/30/2012 3:15:00 PM
hohum duldrums in a life....get a exploder nerf gun and chase him ...hehe just teasing....enjoyed reading your poetic work...well done
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