What's My Fault?

Hollow faith caress bruised esteem
scars hidden underneath the seam
night reverberate silent screams
aborted dreams,aborted dreams

fractured by lustful invasion
modesty lies among treason
Why victims are pinned as reason?
unfold questions, unfold questions.

drenched in shame, locked in guilty vault
she gulps down his ruthless assault
striving for answers, 'What's my fault?'
When life will halt, when life will halt?

Poetry Type - Monotetra
The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four 
lines in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight 
syllables. What makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line 
contains two metrical feet, repeated. It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many 
as desired.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Babcock Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Again a new form that I have not seen. I keep trying to learn a few new ones and am thankful for the contests, who get me motivated to try something new. Enjoyed this write. God Bless Phyl
Brown Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for posting your fasinating poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it. May your weekend be one of good health and may you find joy in living and find buckets of inspiration along the way. Wishing you the best in any contest you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Oh, Rajlakshmi, this is something new for me, this monotetra. I shall have look into it. Monorhyme is alright but what makes it Monotetra? perhaps the syllable count...
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