Whats In Gods Mind

Now my hopes are like Night-jasmine
Do you know for sure what I mean
 
They bloom at night and fall in the morning
They look so nice but they are short-living

Now my life is like a dead rose plant 
It wants flower but God doesn’t grant

I believe firmly God is the Most Kind
But I can’t understand what’s in His mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 29, 2011 at 9:04 AM
I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Asif. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol
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