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What's Deep Inside

Her face
Corrodes in time
Leaving pieces
To flake on the surface
But deep inside her hurt face
Lies sharp shards

Russell Sivey

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Rollo West

December 8, 2012 at 3:23 PM

Hi Russell, this a great write my friend, very deep in thought. Rollo

Jacob Cra

December 8, 2012 at 1:18 PM

Simple but so stellar.Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

Sara Kendrick

December 8, 2012 at 11:59 AM

Very serious work..Is it about a person or maybe a work of art like a statue?Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your kind reviews are appreciated..Sara