Whatnots

Whims flash into his mind
Wading of artist eyes
White of a blank canvas
Whatnots need to be birthed
Waving avant-garde brush
Winter spreads like icing
Wide bunny ears coax snow

5/9/2021
Pleiades W
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
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Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Congrats on a well-deserved win Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend..............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Nicely done, Kim, congratulations on your win. Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:57 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:18 AM
- A lovely poem, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Horsman Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:36 PM
I truly like this poetic gem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:01 PM
And all these years I was writing 'wutchamacallits' -- ~What-Nuts
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:22 AM
LOL!
Evans Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 3:02 PM
White on white and maybe, pinkish hue for wide bunny ears. Congratulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:31 PM
That’s what I was thinking. So glad you saw pink too!
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 2:51 PM
the last few lines are so imaginative! Nicely done, and congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Merryman Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 2:05 PM
I love your line "winter spreads like icing" That really paints a picture! Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Lovefred Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 10:08 AM
WOw Kim your poems are amazing!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!! - Hazel
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Phyllis!
May Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:39 AM
You did the Whatnots well Kim, best wishes
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Thank you, Joesph!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:41 PM
Alas I'm no artist. Loved the mention of a rabbit. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Thank you, Victor. You are an artist of words ~
Buehler Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 7:04 PM
A wonderful poetic creation, Kim. I can easily see this winning. :D
Rodrigues Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! <3
Mcintosh Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Wonderful writing. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Regina! :) God bless you!
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:23 PM
Wow, this is great Kim! Well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Thanj you, Heidi!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:14 PM
This poem is delightful Kim. I think it will do very well in the contest. I wish I had more time to spend here. Blessings xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 5:08 PM
Thank you, Connie!
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