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Whims flash into his mind Wading of artist eyes White of a blank canvas Whatnots need to be birthed Waving avant-garde brush Winter spreads like icing Wide bunny ears coax snow 5/9/2021 Pleiades W Sponsor: Kim Merryman HMS used

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Date: 5/20/2021 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on a well-deserved win Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/14/2021 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 5/12/2021 7:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim, congratulations on your win. Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2021 4:57:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 5/12/2021 2:18:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Kim :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 5/11/2021 8:36:00 PM
I truly like this poetic gem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 5/11/2021 8:01:00 PM
And all these years I was writing 'wutchamacallits' -- ~What-Nuts
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2021 9:22:00 AM
LOL!
Date: 5/11/2021 3:02:00 PM
White on white and maybe, pinkish hue for wide bunny ears. Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:31:00 PM
That’s what I was thinking. So glad you saw pink too!
Date: 5/11/2021 2:51:00 PM
the last few lines are so imaginative! Nicely done, and congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 5/11/2021 2:05:00 PM
I love your line "winter spreads like icing" That really paints a picture! Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 5/11/2021 10:08:00 AM
WOw Kim your poems are amazing!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!! - Hazel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Phyllis!
Date: 5/11/2021 6:39:00 AM
You did the Whatnots well Kim, best wishes
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Joesph!
Date: 5/10/2021 10:41:00 PM
Alas I'm no artist. Loved the mention of a rabbit. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. You are an artist of words ~
Date: 5/10/2021 7:04:00 PM
A wonderful poetic creation, Kim. I can easily see this winning. :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2021 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! <3
Date: 5/10/2021 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful writing. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thank you, Regina! :) God bless you!
Date: 5/10/2021 4:23:00 PM
Wow, this is great Kim! Well done :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2021 5:09:00 PM
Thanj you, Heidi!
Date: 5/10/2021 4:14:00 PM
This poem is delightful Kim. I think it will do very well in the contest. I wish I had more time to spend here. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2021 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!

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