Whatever Floats Your Boat

She floats like a message in a bottle 
on a massive ocean of crystal blue waves 
towards a horizon she never reaches. 


Maurice Yvonne

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Liam Mcdaid

November 9, 2014 at 5:38 PM

beautifully painted picture maurice

Eve Roper

November 9, 2014 at 8:28 AM

Maurice, I love the visual with your poem, good write. :) hugs eve "7"

BE Bailey

November 6, 2014 at 8:47 AM

Beautiful Maurice. Love your work. Hope you are having a great day thus far. Hugs "B"

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2014 at 7:43 PM

hahahah, you told her brownies. I really wish I could have some brownies. They are not legal in Utah.

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2014 at 7:43 PM

love how you have pictures with these too. I did a whole book on etheree based on pictures I took from the internet!!

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2014 at 7:43 PM

Now THIS one is GOOD. You don't need to force rhymes on these itty bitties (that is what we called this kind at shadowpoetry). Just use your clever imagination and say what you really want to say. This is awesome. FAVED.