Whatever

What is the matter with you?
Have you heard anything that I say?
Anything coming through to you at all?
Teasing is not in my vocabulary
Every time you speak so unkindly 
Various words you chose to vomit out
Eventually those same words will help me
Realize that my biggest mistake was loving you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 1, 2026 at 6:54 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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May 6, 2016 at 11:58 AM
DIANNAE CREMA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. **skat**
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April 26, 2016 at 6:15 PM
nice to read this poem again
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November 15, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Hi DiAnne, this is such an excellent piece that I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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November 8, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Dianne, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 6, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Dianne, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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