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What Your Not Told

They never tell you
That watching her fall asleep
Will change your whole life

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Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2013 at 4:04 PM

Great thoughts penned..I don't know that I have experienced this one..Ha!!..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 1, 2013 at 12:52 PM

Is this as sad as it sounds to me Rollo I read it sad enough to touch me deeply xx

Rollo West

January 1, 2013 at 12:54 PM

Yes my friend, and thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 1, 2013 at 12:17 PM

A very lovely poem. - Thanks for your comments on my "new year's haiku" - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Rollo. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West

January 1, 2013 at 12:23 PM

Hello dear friend, I am also looking forward to the New Year, and all the great writes you will send our way. Thank you for commenting on this piece. Rollo

Maureen Lefanue

January 1, 2013 at 3:22 AM

Touching words Rollo. Like you I really enjoy Elizbeth's poetry. Hope you had a great Christmas! Maureen

Rollo West

January 1, 2013 at 11:58 AM

Hi Maureen, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

December 30, 2012 at 11:16 PM

I see your point, and it is so very true! I love to watch my spouse sleep, there' something romantic about that, a special feeling that comes from being so close to the one you love and sharing your life together with her! This Senryu is tremendously fantastic! I just love the tenderness of this poem! Great Work!!

Rollo West

December 30, 2012 at 11:19 PM

Hello my friend, thank you so much for your great comment. rollo