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What Your Not Told

They never tell you That watching her fall asleep Will change your whole life

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2013 4:04:00 PM

Great thoughts penned..I don't know that I have experienced this one..Ha!!..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/1/2013 12:52:00 PM

Is this as sad as it sounds to me Rollo I read it sad enough to touch me deeply xx

Rollo West
Date: 1/1/2013 12:54:00 PM

Yes my friend, and thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2013 12:17:00 PM

A very lovely poem. - Thanks for your comments on my "new year's haiku" - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Rollo. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West
Date: 1/1/2013 12:23:00 PM

Hello dear friend, I am also looking forward to the New Year, and all the great writes you will send our way. Thank you for commenting on this piece. Rollo

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/1/2013 3:22:00 AM

Touching words Rollo. Like you I really enjoy Elizbeth's poetry. Hope you had a great Christmas! Maureen

Rollo West
Date: 1/1/2013 11:58:00 AM

Hi Maureen, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/30/2012 11:16:00 PM

I see your point, and it is so very true! I love to watch my spouse sleep, there' something romantic about that, a special feeling that comes from being so close to the one you love and sharing your life together with her! This Senryu is tremendously fantastic! I just love the tenderness of this poem! Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 11:19:00 PM

Hello my friend, thank you so much for your great comment. rollo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2012 9:32:00 PM

what a wonderful haiku! so different a thought.

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 11:18:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/30/2012 8:54:00 PM

Ohhh, what a sweetest poem, Ron. So enjoyed. What an awesome love!

Rollo West
Date: 12/30/2012 9:00:00 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you so much for stopping by and your comment. Rollo