What Will the Rain Say

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What will the rain say?
It falls the day your father goes to ground 
and palls all hope he loved you anyway,
as it recalls the countless flaws he found.

What will the rain say?
That while it stormed your port had served her best
but when again it warmed, love sank away  
like long forgotten treasure in her chest?

What will the rain say?
When you must keep it out to stay afloat
but drowning doubt seeps through your saddened bay
and leaks into your solitary boat?

What will the rain say?
When water pries your soaking seams undone,
then tries to rise above your head today?
Will you still cry for one last ray of sun?

And what will the rain say...

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 5:02 PM
Love this creative poem and its deep question.. Congrats on your win!!
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:14 AM
LYCIA, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
A. Sharma Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 1:53 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Lycia!
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