What Was I Thinking?

She caught me drinking,
man what the hell was i thinking.
I'm so freaking stupid,
why did I do what I did.
So many excuses passed my mind,
but none of them I can't find.



not done but please comment on how i can prove to my mom 
that i cn do better cause now shes got me caged like a rat
and rate to if u can i dont bite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 20, 2010 at 9:21 AM
don't worry!.......there is a silver lining to every dark cloud.....when you will realize by yourself what mistake you have done.......then your mom will realize her part......coz, when you are positive from inside, a positive vibe surrounds every where.....so don't loose hope friend.
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