What Was

In the wind your voice I hear
Closing my eyes I see you near
Air so crisp and clean;It seems like a dream
Travel on windy wings
Show me what the future brings
Asthe wind blows the sun to rest
A lonely nite is the test
  -I still have dreams-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 12:54 AM
Nice like it check 3rd 4th 5th line, little mistakes hope you don't mind me pointing them out I always appreciate when someone does for me..xx
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