What They Don't Tell You

What they don’t tell You

What the recruiters tell you:
“Be all you can be.”
“An Army of one.”
“Fly high with the Air Force.”
“Join the Navy and see the world.”
“Be the best. Be a Marine.”
“Join the National Guard and get an education and keep your job.”

Things recruiters leave out:
Watching your friend(s) go home in body bag(s).
The dirt and sweat.
C rations, K rations, MRE’s.
PTSD, suicides, drug addiction.
Limbs lost. Traumatic brain injury.
Bloated, decomposing corpses.
Dead men, women and children.
Fear so intense you soil yourself.
Lice, sand, dust, cold, heat.
The stench of death.
Families torn apart.
Long road to rehab or death whichever comes first.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 2/7/2025 4:04:00 AM
So true Oliver. this one is a favorite because you said the real truth...
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/7/2025 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Michael. I hope I did.
Date: 2/6/2025 6:41:00 PM
So true for the ones that see battle. My son was Marine 24 years ago. Where they lied to him and he picked up bad habits such as drinking and swearing. We do need good soldiers but what horrors they go through!
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/6/2025 7:12:00 PM
Yes it is and yes, unfortunately, the bad habits as well. Thanks for reading Andrea.
Date: 2/6/2025 12:24:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. You told both sides. I was married a few weeks when my husband let to go half way around the world. (Sept to March) Missed all our first holidays together. Had many friends in far odd places. Like the song, some gave some then some gave all. My dad almost died from the cold/no food. Have a blessed day writing away..........................
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 2/6/2025 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Paula. The military does put a strain on individuals and families.
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