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What the Whirlpool Keeps

 Time's whirlpool remembers different, than we do. It narrows down to good memories, 
          as time goes by.   Bad moments circle until the rough edges disappear. 
             Only the polished stories, remain in the clear. Yesterday swirls with
                 splinters  in split ends. Memory keeps churning through its
                   cycles   and  spins.   Regrets  settle  out,  where  the
                     sunlight  can't  follow. As softer fragments slowly
                      rise to the surface. The swirl of memory carries
                       away  the bad and bitter. It treasures pearls
                         in  shells found on calmer days. Each spin
                           softens  another stubborn sorrow. Every
                           turn leaves more grace than grief. We
                             mistake    smooth   memories   for
                              perfect  lives. For memory edits
                               itself without our permission.
                                Facts   get   filtered   while
                                 truths learn to swim. Even
                                  pain    returns,    worn
                                   smooth by the current.
                                    Perhaps,  wisdom  is
                                     surviving  through
                                         enough     
                                         revolutions. 
                                         Perhaps,  love
                                         remembers  like
                                             water,  not
                                               like stone. As
                                               the whirlpool
                                             smooths,  the
                                          lives we once    
                                     lived, Until 
                                   only what 
                               really matters, 
                              reaches the 
                              shore.
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 5:28 PM
Wonderful metaphors, form, perhaps what really matters reaches the shores of paradise.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 3:43 PM
Interesting…sure, if you can share…hugs
Anderson Avatar
July 27, 2026 at 6:56 PM
Thanks very much. Glad you liked it. I have a python tool that does that layout and other shapes if you are interested. Cheers and Best wishes.
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