What the Sun Saw

It's bizarre, but I
Envy the Sun because
Today, it saw you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Komala Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Great Haiku ,Great write :) thanks for sharing Annie:) SK
Madonsela Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 4:11 PM
such a strong title. Wonderful poetry. Ronny
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 1:47 PM
you took the imagery to the top, annie... greeat stuff!..:) huggs!
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Well done Annie, sweet - oxox Anne-Lise
Grisetti Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Concise and moving. Nice haiku.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:01 PM
Awww!!! So sweet! Perfect HAIKU phrasing... so grammatically correct. Your flow and enjambment are superb! Well done, Annie!!
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