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What the Sun Saw

It's bizarre, but I Envy the Sun because Today, it saw you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/21/2012 9:30:00 AM
Great Haiku ,Great write :) thanks for sharing Annie:) SK
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Date: 5/20/2012 4:11:00 PM
such a strong title. Wonderful poetry. Ronny
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:47:00 PM
you took the imagery to the top, annie... greeat stuff!..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:26:00 PM
Well done Annie, sweet - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:05:00 PM
Concise and moving. Nice haiku.
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:01:00 PM
Awww!!! So sweet! Perfect HAIKU phrasing... so grammatically correct. Your flow and enjambment are superb! Well done, Annie!!
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