What She Wants, She Gets

Cute little girl 
      knows how to get 
        exactly what she wants,
          when she wants it.
             She doesn't have to say a thing.
               She doesn't even have to cry!
                  She just tilts
                   Her heart-shaped face 
                    Slightly askew and flutters
                   Her pleading doe-eyes. 
                  It works, every time. 
                Daddy caves.
              She wants candy? Done.
            Ice cream? You betcha!
          Another teddy bear? Of course.


Date written: 10/08/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 10:43 PM
Very casual all the same girl-psychological poem. Great! I also thank you for the opportunity given to take part in your contest. Thank you.
Ibeh Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 7:13 AM
You're welcome, Christuraj:-) Thanks for visiting!
Canerdy Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 3:23 PM
So expressive and moving, Edward. Janice
Ibeh Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Thank you very much, Janice:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Hello Edward, this is so cute. A fatheranddaughter moment. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Blessings.
Ibeh Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Blessings to you as well, Darlene:-) Thanks for visiting!
Hankins Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Ah, how we fathers are captivated by our daughters. Lovely poem tribute to yours. I also liked the presentation form you chose.
Ibeh Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Thank you, Milt:-) I"m glad you did!
Logan Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 6:29 AM
The love of a doting father wants his child to be happy. I'll not call it 'spoiling,' but what's the harm? God loves a cheerful giver!
Ibeh Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:14 AM
True indeed, Jenna:-) Thanks for visiting, my friend.
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Sweet! Straight from the voice of a father...
Ibeh Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, Vijay:-) I'm not a father yet, but I see myself being a total pushover!
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