What Really Is Life???

Life is a fantasy, a mixture of illusions
life is a problem with really no solution
life is a treasure unimportant to many
life is a begger mostly for penny
life is a trail which one must pass
life is a choice which always never lasts
life is series of collision with the future
it is no the sum of what we have been but what we yearn to be.....*-*
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Shafiq Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Thanks carol and everyone else for being so kind and welcoming....im quite old at poetry and have been writing at poemhunter.com .ofcourse as im not perfect ill be needy help. Thanks again and goodwishes
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July 26, 2010 at 4:33 PM
Welcome to the soup. Cool Poem. Life is everthing we want it to be and more
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 4:53 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Manahil. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Nice expressions of life
Sweetheart Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. and your take on life.. with luv..
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