Home » Poems » Lu Loo » What Might Have Been

What Might Have Been

for dreams last so long, destined for what might have been- indulged in false hope I chose: "You Were Meant for Me" -Jewel September 2, 2019 Sing Me a Senryu Contest Maureen McGreavy

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/8/2019 2:39:00 AM

I like Jewel but can't place the song - I'll look on YouTube and probably go, 'oh yeah.' Hard to fill 17 syllables with your unique meaning and use some song lines but you seemed to have managed it quite well. Good writing. I would especially like to hear the song if it is truly one of 'your life theme' songs, Bonnie Tyler's, "every now and then I fall apart" is for sure one of mine. Fun challenge. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/2/2019 12:34:00 PM

I often wonder...if false hope is nevertheless a hope... Nice Senryu