what makes you feel

(topic 1) weeping at the first sight of swifts churning ~ every spring to exhale What Makes You Feel Poetry Contest Sponsored by Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/9/2025 9:28:00 AM

Always unique, dear Maureen! First the weeping then swifts churning and an exhale. You say much in this one liner…a headliner! Bless you!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/10/2025 11:43:00 AM

Thank you lovely. They awe me, every year, every time I see them or just hear them. xomo

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/3/2025 8:52:00 AM

Maureen, you have a keen concept of something special. It is a sight to behold and the way you pay homage to it does actually bring tears to my eyes. What a beautiful world we would have if more people could appreciate what's in it. Tears and smiles!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/3/2025 8:05:00 PM

My perennial muse. I dread the spring that they don’t return. My first poem here is my ode to them, if I am remembered by one poem alone I have long hoped it would be that one. I’ve painted and sculpted them, now working theme in different printing mediums. Maybe I’m obsessed. Your words mean more than I can say, thank you. xomo

Deb M

Date: 4/3/2025 1:56:00 AM

Thats so lovely and delightful…nature at its best Mo! Debx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/3/2025 6:18:00 AM

Thank you Deb! True story ;), xomo