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what makes you feel

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weeping at the first sight of swifts churning ~ every spring to exhale 



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CayCay Godwin

May 25, 2025 at 5:42 AM

I read below and enthused over the joy birds (at least certain ones) bring you, I know the feel, many things of nature and other can bring it. It's an awesome vibe inside, I think because one's soul has been touched. Beautiful Monoku ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 25, 2025 at 5:42 PM

Thank you Lovely CatCay! It is all birds of course, just some more extreme than others. Hugs and love! xomo

Kim Rodrigues

April 9, 2025 at 9:28 AM

Always unique, dear Maureen! First the weeping then swifts churning and an exhale. You say much in this one liner…a headliner! Bless you!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 10, 2025 at 11:43 AM

Thank you lovely. They awe me, every year, every time I see them or just hear them. xomo

Duke Beaufort

April 3, 2025 at 8:52 AM

Maureen, you have a keen concept of something special. It is a sight to behold and the way you pay homage to it does actually bring tears to my eyes. What a beautiful world we would have if more people could appreciate what's in it. Tears and smiles!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 3, 2025 at 8:05 PM

My perennial muse. I dread the spring that they don’t return. My first poem here is my ode to them, if I am remembered by one poem alone I have long hoped it would be that one. I’ve painted and sculpted them, now working theme in different printing mediums. Maybe I’m obsessed. Your words mean more than I can say, thank you. xomo