Odeline Chigwedere Poet I do not know?

What Makes It

WHAT MAKES IT
< >What makes it so perfect
      that every one deserves it
      what makes it so evil
      that it ends in pain
      what makes it so arogent 
      that it deprives other people
      what makes it so manipulative 
      that people keep wanting it.
    
     I mean MARRIAGE
     What makes it so normal
     that it is legalised 
     what makes it controling
      that two will be made one
      what makes it so scary
      that you can not do it alone
    
     only God knows what

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Diane Christian May 12, 2012 at 2:03 PM thats a good poem, it is best to let God choose who hes hve in our life, I have ben maried and divorced, and now i wait fuly for God's direction and timing to bring happiness in his perfect time that way no one can hurt me no more Amen.

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 26, 2012 at 8:07 AM Only God should be able to judge what is right and wrong. I've seen enough to know some marriages should never have been legalized.

Perseverance Zinhle Mzimba March 12, 2012 at 2:58 AM NICE

Carol Sunshine Brown March 5, 2012 at 5:28 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you odeline. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol