What Makes America Great

No mere artist or poet can ever portray in oil or verse,
The grandeur of this great land and its people so diverse.
Never since The Founding Fathers set in motion its creation,
Has there been on all the earth a more grand and glorious nation!

Generations of valiant patriots from The Revolution to the present day,
Who placed national destiny above their own, now lie 'neath hallowed clay.
They sacrificed to preserve the precious freedoms God upon us did bestow.
So much, so very much to each of those courageous souls we owe!

Though they seldom get a word of thanks and work for meager pay,
'Tis the ordinary blokes who keep the gears running smoothly every day.
The farmer, the truck driver, the plumber, the postman who delivers mail;
Patriotic, hard working folks who carry their lunch in a beat-up dinner pail.

'Tis the land of opportunity where you can be all you aspire to be,
And enjoy the inalienable rights that The Constitution doth guarantee.
Among these the freedom of speech and the right to worship as you choose.
We are independent souls, yet can agree to disagree about our divergent views!

The pioneering spirit is alive and well in the people of this youthful nation.
We are renowned worldwide for our ingenuity and our innovation.
When it comes to being a generous people, we will not be outdone.
'Tis the people that make America great when all is said and done!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/6/2010 4:19:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to the every day American. Great write, Sarge. You nailed it. Have a great one. Stay cool. 102 here today! Phew. Thank goodness for A/C. Ralph
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:18:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute to the every day American. Great write, Sarge. You nailed it. Have a great one. Stay cool. 102 here today! Phew. Thank goodness for A/C. Ralph
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:42:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Robert. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 2:30:00 AM
Indeed it is the people who make our nation what it is, Bob! This includes those from the past, present and future. May our country forever be a place where independent souls can dwell. Great poem, filled with patriotism and national pride! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/5/2010 8:53:00 PM
Never have I read a more perfect patriotic poem..shame the patirot contest is over with.. this is superb.Bob.... enjoyed a great tribute to America... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:22:00 PM
Indeed....it is the people who make this a wonderful country....spirit is alive and well, in spite of many hurdles we still face! Nicely done, Bob! ~ Carrie
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