What It Was Like Back Then

WHAT IT WAS LIKE BACK THEN

As a lad of five, I recall watching
As my older sisters boarded the bus for school

I longed to join them but at that young age
Starting school was against the rule

But persistence paid off, the rule was 'bent'
And off to school at age five I went

Miss Ruby taught the first grade class
I soon became her favorite lass

Alas!  Miss Ruby passed away
And didn't make graduation day

25 September 2018
For the contest sponsored by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 8:03 PM
So sad. Congrats on your winning poem, Curtis.
Moorman Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thanks, Line. This is a true one!
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Curtis, congratulations on your win. Nice memories ; I cannot remember a lot of my past:)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:36 AM
lovely piece Curtis full of memories of yesteryear. Nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings, Gordon
Moorman Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Thanks, Gordon! I always enjoy and appreciate your comments and support.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 11:16 AM
A sad ending, but I am sure her spirit was there, smiling and cheering you on.
Moorman Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Ditto, Caren! As always, thanks for stopping by.
Gentile Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 3:32 PM
It sounds like a wonderful childhood memory, except for Miss Ruby of course !!!
Moorman Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Life is filled with so many memories, Mike. Miss Ruby was 70 when I started school at age 5. She retired when I was in the sixth grade and passed away when I was in the tenth grade. She was a wonderful Christian who taught us the value of prayer, the Pledge of Allegiance, and kindness to each other. Oh that those days could return to America. Thanks for lending an ear!
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