What It Isn't

it isn't what it is it is what it isn't a window a prism a lens a schism fresh metaphors and similes the light from which the darkness flees that lets the eye see what it sees removing blinds transforming minds it isn't what it is it is what it isn't
"We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are." -Anaïs Nin "Art isn't the truth. Art is a lie that makes us realize the truth" -Pablo Picasso
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Gauthier Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 10:38 PM
Wow convoluted yet insightful ~
Watt Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Line, thank you very much for your insightful comment. Convoluted is a good word!
Kauffman Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations John. There is true depth here. Love the descending format. Reminds me of my poem "One." You very successfully used an inclusive format - one of my favorites - to draw us in and then "resolve "wink -wink" the poetic tension built into the verse. Nicely done! Blessings my friend.
Watt Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Sam. I love your "One" poem, I'm happy this reminded you of that gem.
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 3:15 PM
this is one I had faved and you only got an HM? Geeez. WEll, my HM twin. Today we are not twins. I got Nuttin'!!
Watt Avatar
June 4, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Hmmm...
Neumann Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 4:21 AM
Very well captured ...
Watt Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 10:03 AM
Thank you, Kai.
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 5:39 PM
I see you took the quote to mean a little different from how I took it. For me it meant that we view others according to our own standards. I'm so bad at knowing if I am interpreting certain quotes the right way or not!!
Watt Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Poetry allows for flexible interpretations. I wouldn't say mine is necessarily the correct one. I put it out there for just such a multiplicity of viewpoints. Thanks for reading! (Soupmail) ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:28 PM
puzzles are hard for me, but I catch the essence of this one and I find it VERY creative. excellent writing, John. A fave for ME.
Watt Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 11:47 PM
(2) ...as we consider WHY we believe things are beautiful, ugly, or plain. Thank you for the supportive words, the fave, and for taking time to puzzle this out. I'm so glad you caught the essence ~ John
Watt Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 11:45 PM
Andrea - to me, the Anaïs Nin quote is a paraphrase of the old adage "beauty is in the eye of the beholder". Observing art (be it poetry, sculpture, paintings, music, architecture, whatever) shines a light on us (continued...)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:31 PM
Hello John Watt, What it isn't An. I find this poem like a puzzle to be figured out. An interesting poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:18 AM
Hello John Watt,yes I find this very interesting. Have a nice day my friend.
Watt Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 11:32 PM
Thank you Darlene, for being willing to puzzle this one out. I'm glad you found it interesting ~ John
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