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What Is Wrong

What is wrong with everyone? Are we so caught up with ourselves we do not notice everyone else? Have we all gone out for some air? Only to see that no one is there. Why am I the only one that sees? There is more to the world than just me? We only have one life to live you see. So why do we act like we have two or three? For you see the life we live is not what we want to see. We only want to live in a fantasy.

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Clifford Villalon

Date: 1/12/2023 3:24:00 AM

Very cool Sir! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/10/2023 3:32:00 PM

There is truth in this write William' and there is A way out but the exit lights are all turned off.'

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/3/2023 5:59:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/2/2023 5:36:00 PM

Sadly, I see much avoidance , disconnection and denial lately. I can relate to your poem. Well done. Happy New Year :)