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What Is Wrong

I take a step My ankle’s broke I turn my head I have a stroke What is wrong? Asks my concerned mate I’m old I’m fat. I’m sixty-eight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/23/2020 12:44:00 PM
Caren, I know the feeling. I take a step and lose balance. Perhaps best to laugh at these age things. Take care. Tony x
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/23/2020 6:21:00 PM
I have to admit I never realized getting older meant you would lose your eyes and your feet!
Date: 9/22/2020 10:10:00 AM
you cracked me up with this one, caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/22/2020 5:45:00 PM
I could not resist; my body and I have been having a time lately. I keep pretending I am much younger and it laughs.

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