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What Is There Today

What you see today Might be just a fake ray And be not as they say Or it might just be a fake way What you hear today Probably has not come to stay For who knows if it pay Even if it comes to you in golden tray What you taste today If whenever in your belly it relays Like a running train with no delay Not every plant grows in the month of may The path you walk today Might just not be okay Shouldn't or should you dance in gay Most green succulents always become hay Don't relent on what you see today Listen, watch but don't take the play If its hard carving diamonds then use clay Never lose hope, don't let the dreams of tomorrow decay

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/24/2016 8:30:00 PM

I think i forgot to give you the seven my friend so there you are, done....Vladislav.

White Sage
Date: 1/25/2016 2:38:00 AM

thanks so much dear Vladislav, i really appreciate that

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/24/2016 8:29:00 PM

Hi White Sage, I Love the way you give hope at the end of the poem my friend. I always like poetry that has a rather positive ending, leave the reader with hope and that you do. There is a flip side to every coin my friend and you show us the flip side. Things may be bad but they can always get better. Hang on to those dreams of tomorrow and a new dawn does always shine. These are just a few things i see in your write. A seven from me my friend....Vladislav.

White Sage
Date: 1/25/2016 2:37:00 AM

thanks Vladislav, i also like it when hope comes at the end, though i write some sad piece too...am glad you came by

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 12/31/2015 11:29:00 AM

"Don't let dreams of tomorrow decay" is best of lines filled with hope and promise of something good in the making. Happy New Year with peace and prosperity. Thanks for stopping by with your warmth.

White Sage
Date: 12/31/2015 3:22:00 PM

thanks iris, wish you a blissful season