What Is Real

I saw a tree crying in the rain
A woman hurting with no pain 
The wind blowing but I couldn't 
prove it
The earth spinning but I could 
not move it
The song itself could not sing
The thought it travelled with no 
wings
The words alone could not 
speak 
The gauge could measure but 
could not heat
The ocean roared but could not 
rain
The valley moves not yet isn't 
lame, and a deck of cards can't 
play a game
A knife can cut but can't taste 
the meat
And a drum can never hear a 
beat
yet a broken heart can keep on 
beating
Fall leafs can fall without 
leaving
But can you cry without your 
tears?
Can time go by and not make 
years?
Can you lose your mind and 
still be sane?
Can she hurt . . . and not feel 
pain?
And a tree can't cry in pouring 
rain
But looks can be deceiving and 
memories can fail
Perhaps it was the woman 
crying in the rain, and the tree 
that could not feel
For who's to say what's really 
real?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/9/2020 11:13:00 PM
Great beauty and diamond cut feelings xo
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Date: 2/24/2016 10:02:00 PM
Some mighty fine one-liners!! Love it.
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Date: 4/5/2015 4:11:00 PM
KELLY, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2014 12:13:00 AM
I like this poem. It really makes one think.
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Date: 12/30/2013 4:25:00 PM
I love the message of this one too! Who is to say what is real? It's amazing how real imagination can be.
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