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~1st Place~
Premiere Contest: A Rhyming Poem on Love, New Or Old 
Sponsor: by Lu Loo
Judged: 03/12/2019

~1st Place~
Contest: The Best Love Poem EVER
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 08/26/2016

~1st Place~
Contest: Love Poems (Make Me Fall In Love With Your Poem)
Sponsor: Alexis Y.
Judged: 12/15/2015

Premiere Contest WinnerWhat Is Love


A tender smile, a fleeting glance,
   Eyes that meet to touch the soul,
A beating heart, a breathless breath,
   A deepened sense of something whole.

A need to please and give of self,
   To share all things of mind and heart
With openness and sweet surrender,
   And of the whole become a part.

A touch of closeness and of warmth,
   The radiance of inner glow,
Bathe in light- an endless aura,
   A current charged with- endless flow.

To feel another's joy and pain,
   Two beating hearts, as one, to care.
And of the thoughts, that words can't speak,
   Two open souls, in silence, share.

To speak of love through word and song
   Is at its best, mere child’s play,
In contrast to the silent prose
   That heart and soul, through love, convey.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Drowley Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win! Especially liked your fourth stanza. David:)
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, David, for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated! Sandra ;)
Agustin Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 2:17 AM
Wow! Congrats! Love at work...vividly. God bless you.
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Thank you for your visit and uplifting comments, Beata! Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your great win.
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:17 AM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:40 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sandra! You said it beautifully.
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:17 AM
Thank you very much, Agnes. I appreciate your lovely comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Williams Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Sandra, this is a truly lovely poem! Big CONGRATULATIONS on your top-o-the-podium win with this beauty!! All my very best to you and yours, my friend! :) Bartholomew
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:16 AM
Thanks so much, Bartholomew, for your uplifting comments and congrats. Much appreciated! Sandra ;)
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Thank you so much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Neumann Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:02 AM
Good stuff, great write. Kai
Nusker Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Sandra, its such a delightful poem. Very well expresses. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Thank you very much, Afzal. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment and congrats. Sandra
Nusker Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Sorry, I meant expressed.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 10:55 PM
A world of poet...no wonder the rational shun it for it keeps romance alive and everlasting! :D Well done Sandra!Sunita :)
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Thank you very much, Sunita, for your fine appreciation of my love poem and your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:39 PM
OMG Sandra! This IS the Best Love poem ever! Spoken like someone who knows how to love unselfishly, unconditionally, compassionately, and passionately. This is a fave for me my friend! Congratulations on your first place win. I am thrilled to be in your company. 7+ hugs, Connie ; )
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Dear Connie, I am so honored with the Fave and 7, and with your lovely and supportive comments! Thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:07 PM
I never saw this tenderly lovely and beautifully worded poem last December, I would have remembered its moving depth. Superb. AND congrats! You and your pen rock, Sandra, and move me ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay, for your kind and supportive comments. I am honored that you enjoyed it! Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. I love how you describe what is so universal about love.
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:28 AM
Thank you very much, Agnes, for your uplifting comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:42 PM
SANDRA, wonderful win. **SKAT**
Y. Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Sandra, Thanks for participating in my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win! :-) Alexis
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Hi Alexis, thank you for offering such a fine contest. I appreciate my placement so very much! Thanks again. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your romantic win. LUV **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Romance in the air! Congrats Sandra!
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your sweet Romantic win. I had a lovely time reading every poem. Stop by my latest blog "Because of you" if you'd like or have time. LOVE LINDA
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 8:00 AM
Excellent pen Sandra! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Haight Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:53 PM
Hi Dorian, thank you so much for your kind comment and support! Have a great weekend. Love and hugs back! Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 9:15 AM
how this flows enchants the wonder of love, Sandra... lovely!.. huggs
Haight Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Hi Nette, thank you so much for your positive comment. I really appreciate it. Just saw your contest results for Whispers of a Muse! After working so hard on my poem, Snow Dance, I forgot to go to the site and enter it into your contest!! Anyway, it was fun working on it. Thanks again. Sandra"
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Thanks for letting me know that my poem had been selected to be poem of the day and for all the visits to read my work..This work is an Ahhhhh!! Very emotive and expressive passionate work..I am going to fav it..Sara
Fairbrother Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Beautiful work of art, Thanks for the read.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 12:04 AM
Wow, I believe you have been touched by an angel. Your pen is just writing masterpieces at the moment. 7+fav of coarse for this. Beautiful Sandra.
Haight Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Hi Brenda, thank you so much for your positive comment on this poem and for your support. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
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