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Bubbling in a glass. Served icy cold in bucket. Cork flies across room 5/1/2021 ~6~ Rhymed Senryu

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/2/2021 7:04:00 PM

To prove indubitably what a big drinker I am, I read this as 'cork-flies,' like 'tsetse-flies' or something. lol. Good one, Pangie, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/3/2021 2:19:00 PM

Huysterical Gershon. And thank you for saying "good one" Pangie xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/2/2021 12:14:00 PM

Lovely words. God bless you, Love, Gina

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/2/2021 1:10:00 PM

Hope you are having a great day, Gina. Thank you for commenting.on the Piem itself Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/2/2021 3:45:00 AM

Im going to say champagne, cheers. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/2/2021 12:12:00 PM

You won....free trip to California,,,this time to beautiful wine country.))) don't think you need a rioter to knock you on the head, a view of tents or streets slick with manure from humans, do you,in that once beautiful and friendly city. Wait till we get rid of our governor. A major lunatic, Pangie xx