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Bubbling in a glass.
Served icy cold in bucket.
Cork flies across room

          5/1/2021
             ~6~

       Rhymed Senryu
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Wolf Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 7:04 PM
To prove indubitably what a big drinker I am, I read this as 'cork-flies,' like 'tsetse-flies' or something. lol. Good one, Pangie, Gershon
Romios Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Huysterical Gershon. And thank you for saying "good one" Pangie xx
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May 2, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Lovely words. God bless you, Love, Gina
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Hope you are having a great day, Gina. Thank you for commenting.on the Piem itself Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Im going to say champagne, cheers. Tom
Romios Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 12:12 PM
You won....free trip to California,,,this time to beautiful wine country.))) don't think you need a rioter to knock you on the head, a view of tents or streets slick with manure from humans, do you,in that once beautiful and friendly city. Wait till we get rid of our governor. A major lunatic, Pangie xx
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