Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

What Is In Santa Sack

The corpulent postman from local town,
looked perfect wearing his red Santa gown,
but when he shouted loudly ho ho ho!
his belt snapped, and pants dropped low to his toe!


1st placement
A funny Christmas themed 4 liner contest
Tania Kitchin sponsored
10 syllables each line
written 06/01/2022

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Jan Allison January 9, 2022 at 5:41 PM not only his outfit that was red lol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Krish Radhakrishna January 9, 2022 at 9:58 PM Thanks Jan!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 9, 2022 at 3:30 PM Congrats, Krish, on your top win. Enjoyed very much. BW~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna January 9, 2022 at 9:58 PM Thanks Mala! :)

Terry Flood January 9, 2022 at 11:59 AM Ahh modern times… used to be an orange from Santa… now it’s a sausage! Congrats Krish. Terry Krish Radhakrishna January 9, 2022 at 12:38 PM Ha ha ha Terry!! Indeed, modern times!!

Tom Cunningham January 9, 2022 at 9:59 AM Ho ho ho lol, back with congrats Krish. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom Krish Radhakrishna January 9, 2022 at 12:37 PM Thanks Once again Tom!!:)

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2022 at 9:22 AM so cute!! Big congrats for the great win Krish Radhakrishna January 9, 2022 at 12:37 PM Thanks Andrea!!:)

Tania Kitchin January 9, 2022 at 8:39 AM Krish, this made me laugh, congratulations on your first place win! Krish Radhakrishna January 9, 2022 at 12:37 PM Thank you Tania! Pleased you like it! Enjoyed the contest!:)

Tom Cunningham January 8, 2022 at 7:44 AM Lol, bet his face was as red as Rudolphs nose. Tom Krish Radhakrishna January 8, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thanks Tom! the crowd went ho ho ho too!