What Is In Santa Sack

The corpulent postman from local town,
looked perfect wearing his red Santa gown,
but when he shouted loudly ho ho ho!
his belt snapped, and pants dropped low to his toe!


1st placement
A funny Christmas themed 4 liner contest
Tania Kitchin sponsored
10 syllables each line
written 06/01/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/9/2022 5:41:00 PM
not only his outfit that was red lol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/9/2022 9:58:00 PM
Thanks Jan!:)
Date: 1/9/2022 3:30:00 PM
Congrats, Krish, on your top win. Enjoyed very much. BW~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/9/2022 9:58:00 PM
Thanks Mala! :)
Date: 1/9/2022 11:59:00 AM
Ahh modern times… used to be an orange from Santa… now it’s a sausage! Congrats Krish. Terry
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/9/2022 12:38:00 PM
Ha ha ha Terry!! Indeed, modern times!!
Date: 1/9/2022 9:59:00 AM
Ho ho ho lol, back with congrats Krish. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/9/2022 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Once again Tom!!:)
Date: 1/9/2022 9:22:00 AM
so cute!! Big congrats for the great win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/9/2022 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!!:)
Date: 1/9/2022 8:39:00 AM
Krish, this made me laugh, congratulations on your first place win!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/9/2022 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Tania! Pleased you like it! Enjoyed the contest!:)
Date: 1/8/2022 7:44:00 AM
Lol, bet his face was as red as Rudolphs nose. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/8/2022 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Tom! the crowd went ho ho ho too!
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