What Is

What is the young with out the old?
What is the winter without the cold?
What is the river without it's flow?
What is a cheetah that moves too slow?

What is a song that can not be sung 
What is bow that can not be undone
What does us mean
Without you and me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rhinem Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 12:20 AM
Smile ~ "Soulful, Sweet & 'Beautiful Crystal;' Excellently Expressed Painting From The Heart!?" ~ "Keep Reaching & Brushing The Canvas' of Happiness & Hope" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Happy Holidays;" Bye!:) ~
Onclaud Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 8:21 PM
wonderfully woven with a such sense of sensibilties, crystal!! amazing poet you are! huggs, nette :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Love how you built up to that last line, Crystal! "what does us mean without you and me?" GREAT!!!
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading your work..Good questions that you asked..Sara
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