Carole Cookie Arnold Poet Rhyme

What If We Could See

What If We Could See


What if…
Three pink suns hung
In a sky where silk was spun
Over a sea of blueberry cream
With shores of cinnamon sugar

What if…

Beach benches were made of curds
With paths made of colorful nerds 
Candy apples popped up from the sand
Laughter was made by a banjo players hand

What if…

Summer days dripped with honey
And a smile was worth more than money
Our days would be carefree and rich
Sewn together in love stitch by stitch


Carole Cookie Arnold

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Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2011 at 5:21 PM Amazingly creative, CArole. Congratulations on getting two poems through in round one of Soup's big contest. Your smiling face matches with the sunny theme of this cute poem!

Wendy Okeke December 15, 2011 at 12:59 AM That was lovely, what if everything was as beautiful as this piece time will stop.... beautiful!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown December 12, 2011 at 7:38 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carole. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2011 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Carole. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor June 14, 2011 at 3:00 PM Congrats on your HM, Carole. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Dr.Ram Mehta June 14, 2011 at 1:52 PM My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Carole

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 14, 2011 at 1:24 PM Congrats Cookie on your HM in this contest with this excellent entry luv..

Joe Maverick June 12, 2011 at 4:32 PM enjoyed this very discriptive poem of yours Cookie, and so good to escape into its world..may God bless your efforts.!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 10, 2011 at 6:42 AM Brilliant way weaving the imagery, Carole

Carol Sunshine Brown June 10, 2011 at 6:13 AM Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carole. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Richard Moriarty June 10, 2011 at 4:21 AM A smile is worth more than money, and you've given me a big one by your writing, thank you so much

Anthony Nutter June 10, 2011 at 2:54 AM Sweet poem, really shows off your imagination and talent. Nice piece. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052U4O5U