What If We Could See

What If We Could See What if… Three pink suns hung In a sky where silk was spun Over a sea of blueberry cream With shores of cinnamon sugar What if… Beach benches were made of curds With paths made of colorful nerds Candy apples popped up from the sand Laughter was made by a banjo players hand What if… Summer days dripped with honey And a smile was worth more than money Our days would be carefree and rich Sewn together in love stitch by stitch Carole Cookie Arnold

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Date: 12/28/2011 5:21:00 PM
Amazingly creative, CArole. Congratulations on getting two poems through in round one of Soup's big contest. Your smiling face matches with the sunny theme of this cute poem!
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Date: 12/15/2011 12:59:00 AM
That was lovely, what if everything was as beautiful as this piece time will stop.... beautiful!!!
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Carole. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Carole. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Carole. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:52:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Carole
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congrats Cookie on your HM in this contest with this excellent entry luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 4:32:00 PM
enjoyed this very discriptive poem of yours Cookie, and so good to escape into its world..may God bless your efforts.!
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:42:00 AM
Brilliant way weaving the imagery, Carole
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:13:00 AM
Wishing you a wonderful day and weekend too. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carole. I hope your weekend is filled with love and joy and you find your soul filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2011 4:21:00 AM
A smile is worth more than money, and you've given me a big one by your writing, thank you so much
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:54:00 AM
Sweet poem, really shows off your imagination and talent. Nice piece. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052U4O5U
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