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What If She Catches Us

Creaky iron gate to the old cemetery slowly opened into the scene. It was one of the scariest I had observed, even on a Halloween. Old one-eye was stirring a concoction in a cauldron of black. Jack-o-lanterns were astounded, and the ghouls were holding back. She was a frightening entity, this century old savvy witch. We were terrified, so we were silent and laid down in the ditch. What if she catches us? My sister whispered. Her voice was a squeak. I heard footsteps come near us, and I did not dare peek.

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Date: 10/19/2022 10:23:00 PM
Shade of 'Pip' in the cemetary at the start of 'Great Expectations.'
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/20/2022 1:34:00 AM
I did like that book.
Date: 10/19/2022 8:48:00 AM
You girls should be home snuggled up in bed. What in the world are you doing hanging out at the old cemetery on Halloween night? Oh, well...did you slip out the bedroom window to go for a romp?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/20/2022 1:34:00 AM
We did that all the time from ages 12 to 14. (Thinking no one would know - ha! We live in a SMALL town with Ms. Cravitch from Bewitched on every corner).

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