What If

WHAT IF?
You think you’re alone
You think no one cares
You think you’re alone
Because no one ever cares
Well let me ask you a question…
What if…?
What if you pulled the trigger
What if you slashed the knife
What if you took the pills 
That would forever end your life
Because then you’re dead
You’re gone
You can never come back
You can’t come back to the family that will miss you
The family that will mourn and cry, 
and always ask
Why
Why did you leave if everyone does care?
Why, when we care
‘You think you’re alone
You think no one cares
Well let me tell you something
Someone does care
So don’t end your life
Keep living
Keep pushing
Make them see you
Make them care
Because you’re not alone
People do care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 14, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Anne,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 9, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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July 9, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Anne. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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July 9, 2014 at 7:57 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Anne :) - I choose your first great written poem - People do care! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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July 8, 2014 at 10:57 PM
Anne, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 8:22 PM
Right on...keep pushing...Life is worth living....welcome Anne...hugs Tim
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July 8, 2014 at 6:46 PM
Hi Anne, this is such a deep, insightful, powerful write. I enjoyed reading it and the meaningful questions that you posed. And, yes, there are people who do care even when things seem utterly hopeless. Well done!
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