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What If

What if I told you I loved you that your love is as delicate as my heart that having you close makes me feel all more alive and I love seeing that look in your eyes that look I see in our private moments and doesn't hide even in our darkest moments this feeling I embrace you in my life this moment this hour this very day I love you

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Date: 6/15/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Ashley. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 2:54:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Ash. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:50:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Ashley
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:16:00 PM
Congrats Ahsley on your HM for this excellent entry luv..super write..luv..
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:15:00 PM
Congrats Ashley on your HM for this excellent entry luv.. super..
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:20:00 AM
Luv*Skat
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:05:00 PM
Passionate expressions of feelings of love nicely worded, Ashley
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Date: 5/31/2011 10:46:00 AM
what if should be a said now :)
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