What If

What if I told you 
I loved you
that your love is as delicate
as my heart 
that having you close
makes me feel
all more alive 
and I love seeing
that look in your eyes
that look I see
in our private moments
and doesn't hide 
even in 
our darkest moments
this feeling I embrace
you in my life
this moment
this hour
this very day 
I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Desiree's "What If" contest Ashley. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Congrats on your HM, Ash. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:50 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of desiree, Ashley
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:16 PM
Congrats Ahsley on your HM for this excellent entry luv..super write..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Congrats Ashley on your HM for this excellent entry luv.. super..
A  Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:20 AM
Luv*Skat
Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Passionate expressions of feelings of love nicely worded, Ashley
Arteaga Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 10:46 AM
what if should be a said now :)
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