What If

What if my muse were to up and leave? With no inspiration to write how would my thoughts be conveyed, my feelings now expressed? How would this page look with nothing penned? Like my life.... simply blank. Sunday 10th April

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Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 6/3/2011 7:33:00 PM

Nice style to your poem. Enjoyed this read. Keep up your inspirtation. (:

Rick Berry

Date: 5/3/2011 1:03:00 AM

Emma, I had to read this twice. OK, three times! Now, you have me thinking the same thoughts. I love it!

John Castro

Date: 5/1/2011 7:06:00 PM

emma everythying you write touches me in a very personal way i cant explain it but at times i feel like crying when i read your poems. 7up!!!!

Matt Hunt

Date: 4/18/2011 8:51:00 PM

Very good. Thank you so much for your review. R.M.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/11/2011 4:51:00 PM

Very nice Nonet Emma....Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/11/2011 11:33:00 AM

Nice analogy and metaphor, Emma

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/11/2011 2:45:00 AM

Scary reflective write. Nice piece enjoyed the imaginative read.