What If.....

wondering where you are
loving this moment we're in
what if i said this not what i wanted? 
i wanted to do this different
i tryed to save you
but you didn't listen to me
you'd still be here 
what if i was there to stop you?
you're gone now
missing you with every breath i take
crying day and night 
what if.....i said i'm here
I LOVE YOU
GoodBye My Friend

In Loving Memory
Of Cory Flemming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 9/23/2008 1:01:00 PM
:D
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Date: 9/16/2008 8:22:00 PM
it's about getting pushed too far, i wrote it with my band some while ago i'll tell you on the phone
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Date: 9/13/2008 7:41:00 PM
Hey, do i owe you $200?
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:31:00 PM
XD Yay!
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:28:00 PM
I know XD
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:25:00 PM
XD we'll talk
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:19:00 PM
Damn, already?
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:15:00 PM
XD, ideas
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:10:00 PM
I know >.>
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:06:00 PM
I can't hurt Evan >.>
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Date: 9/13/2008 4:01:00 PM
Love you too!
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Date: 9/13/2008 3:25:00 PM
what makes you assume that? I just want Ed to talk and listen to me again
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Date: 9/13/2008 1:05:00 PM
hey uhh do we need to quit talking to one another?
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:16:00 PM
Thank you. G;night.
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:11:00 PM
Yes. . . . I just wish youd stop talking to David. . . .you dont haftu tho. . . .
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:08:00 PM
I guess. . .
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Date: 9/12/2008 8:03:00 PM
I love you too. . .
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:57:00 PM
So whatchyu mean?
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:54:00 PM
:(
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:51:00 PM
I get blamed for so much. . . .ppl are calling me a freak for what i just did. . . .
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:43:00 PM
. . . . Gawd damn. . . .
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:39:00 PM
I didnt mean it like that! Ok fine. Good night.
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:27:00 PM
Its ready.
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Date: 9/12/2008 7:17:00 PM
Actually nevermind. Ima write you a poem.
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Date: 9/12/2008 11:50:00 AM
XD Hi!
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