What I Would Give But To Relive

WHAT I WOULD GIVE BUT TO RELIVE


The wonder of your glorious body pounding into mine

The magic of your fiery lips to make my spirit shine.

Your racing blood pursued my veins --now virgin iced for years--

A blade awake and passion freed --the truth escaped through tears.



Parental terror took your life--I finally know your plight--

Stroll with me in moonlight, Love--I'm forever yours tonight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/11/2014 8:41:00 PM
nice win.... . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/2/2014 4:17:00 PM
Dear Victoria, Your words touched my soul! This is timeless! Luv, chuck
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Date: 1/15/2014 7:01:00 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Victoria
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Date: 1/13/2014 6:37:00 AM
Wow! Good write Victoria
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Date: 1/12/2014 9:39:00 PM
Very emotional write on love, Victoria
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:48:00 PM
wow, awesome write, Vic
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 1/19/2014 4:18:00 PM
thanks Jack. Now I am ready to write again. All moved. Vic
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