Saba Khan Poet Rhyme

What I Want--Only You

Maa....
Trying to find Light in life, walking on sharp knife, darkness everywhere is seen..
Seeing families, moving in valleys, I'm lost in the field green

Crying of fear, nobody's near, hugging my teddy
Screaming of grief, nobody providing relief, I'm thrown already!

And keep on asking..Where are you??

Paa..
Searching for you, What should I do, I can only cry
On morning, I'm waiting, you ain't there to say HY!

Left me alone, where have you gone, I can only mourn
Found you everywhere, here and there, since I'm born

BUT..WHERE HAVE YOU GONE??

Parents..
You taught me to live, to believe and to do well
But Didn't tell how to live without you, to believe without you, I'm Living in HELL !

Fighting every moment, like life is on rent, Just ''YOU'' this lil girl wants!!
I want..I wish..I desire..You..Only You My Parents!

But...I Don't see You..Where Are you???

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I've written it for a girl I know whose parents are both dead..I feel for her very very much..My she get the Best in both the worlds,Ameen..
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Poetess : Saba, Pakistan
Date : May 29,2014
10.58 AM

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M. Shahid H. Chouhdry August 26, 2014 at 10:32 AM Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination Saba Khan October 10, 2014 at 2:51 AM Thank you for your uplifting comments.

Jan Allison July 21, 2014 at 3:28 AM Such a heartbreaking write Saba written with such emotion it had me in tears. She is so luck to have your support. Hugs Jan xxx Saba Khan July 21, 2014 at 5:17 AM Thanku for your visit

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 2, 2014 at 4:08 AM A touching sentimental poem on the orphan's behalf! Makes me teary. U have writen it an impresive style. Nice to read u again Saba Khan July 17, 2014 at 6:04 AM Thank you very much for your kind words and your visit :)

Sam Raj June 9, 2014 at 4:09 AM A wonderful heart breaking write. And this friend is truly lucky to have you as a buddy? But in am truly sorry. And Saba, am very happy to have you from my neighbouring country as a friend. We can perhaps improve relationship through poems. Keep in touch Saba Khan June 11, 2014 at 3:43 AM Why not? Thank you for visiting:)

Scott Thirtyseven June 5, 2014 at 6:22 AM That is an amazing poem, so soft, yet you let her strength show through. Well penned. I love the rented life line, a gem within a gem. Saba Khan June 8, 2014 at 11:38 PM Thanks for your visit :)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2014 at 7:42 AM - Whether you are young or old .... sad to lose mother and father - I hope she has many good friends .... like you Saba - A heartbreaking poem - well written! - Wish you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Saba Khan June 2, 2014 at 9:04 AM yes that's right..thank you for your visit and your words

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2014 at 10:03 PM this is sad, especially if she is a very young girl. I hope she is able to make it on her own. you are a big help to her, I am sure!! Saba Khan May 31, 2014 at 6:56 AM She lives far from me! I wish I could do something for her :( Thank you for visiting

Sara Kendrick May 29, 2014 at 5:21 AM No matter the age when both parents die, a person feels like an orphan..Well, maybe not all people but some..Enjoyed reading your very creative, descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara Saba Khan May 31, 2014 at 6:57 AM Absolutely right..nobody can replace parents...Thanks a lot for your kind words