What I Need Concealed

When I cannot tell you how I feel
When I want to see you ,not  to speak,
I talk about the weather like a  fool

Sometimes when I’m tired I feel unreal
Or life seems lost and  meaning seems to leak
Then I  can not  tell you how I feel.

Some months have their winds to make misrule
Winds to  throttle  throats and freeze the cheeks
I talk about the weather ,as its cool.

We must keep moving or our blood congeals
So sheep must  on moorland  frosty, bleak
I don’t want to  lie for  life is real

When winter mocks our age I find it cruel
Yet you are old and for amusement look
I talk about  the sunshine like a  fool

Oh,happy   snowfalls keeping us from school
As on the ice we tumbled with loud shrieks
When I  cannor   tell you how I feel
The weather  stands for  what  I   have concealed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/1/2017 10:56:00 AM
If you search for Katherine Keats Braithwaite, you will find all of your poems attributed to her, above, and to Katherine Thwaite, below. You may want to sort this out with Poetry Soup. Best Wishes.
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 10/1/2017 5:44:00 AM
I've been ill.Katherine Thwaite is me but not the other one!!
Date: 10/24/2016 10:49:00 AM
This one is really good. I enjoyed reading it. I can identify with that and you reached me. Thanks.
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 10/24/2016 11:07:00 AM
It surprised me because at first I was criticial of people talking about the weather... but other messages come through.Thanks for that reading,Heidi.
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