What I Love About You

verse 1

numb feelings
painted ceilings
fast healings
sealed dealings
so appealing

is what I love about you
what I love about you

smooth fashion
hearts passion
foods rations
looks dashing
eyes flashing

is what I love about you
what I love about you

your love potion
your blue oceans
those nod notions
hip motions
smell of baby lotion

is what I love about you
what I love about you

azure skies
mystical eyes
shapely thighs
wispering cries
tells me why

is what I love about you
what I love about you

verse 2

for it comes as no suprise
as it opened up my eyes
makes me just want to reach out to that sky
and pull you close and near by
for this I'll tell you why

is what I love about you
is what I love about you

verse 3

for you make me feel so high
when I know your standing close by
take my hand lord for I am very shy
and I promise I won't cry
and for this you'll know why

is what I love about you
is what I love about you




Tribute To Christ Our Lord
{Amen}
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Harman Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 5:46 AM
I do like this one, you write well, that isnt in question. I look for depth, esp. emotions.
Torbenson Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 11:41 AM
This is a very good poem good job I really enjoyed reading this
Brown Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Katherine. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Adeite Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Hey, great tribute, I love the flow of words, what a wonderful lyric. Great you Kate! Adeleke
Devonshire Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 8:29 AM
This read like a great song, Katherine, so I was not surprised when I read our note at the end. There is a pop song "What I Like about You," but yours has much more depth. Creative form and great rhyme scheme as well. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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