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What I Have Found

Lying with you there on the ground the night is silent cept for a distant sound it rolls from above ,but does`ntcome down, the flashes that caused it shows what I have found Just when I should be calm and quite content I think ahead to the next day and I doubt it`ll be the way I want it. I was starting to feel weak and wrong and I began to shiver. Then you squeeezed me tight and str;ong `till I coukld only quiver. My breath was shalllow and quick and I was scared, then you squeezed me even tighter untill my fear was bared. I was begining to think I`ll alllways sleep alone, then you were beside me and we were alone. I felt unsure , then you said for sure. I was startring to wander and float off the ground, then you took me where no one was around, we stirred up some thunder and sparked some lighting, for some reason that storm was not so frightening. (c) Brian Bain 0

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Date: 6/16/2016 10:15:00 AM
Brian,, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 4/6/2010 8:20:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/4/2010 7:26:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brian. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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